November 24, 1813.
You must pardon me once more, as it is all for your good: it must be thus:
He makes a Solitude, and calls it Peace.
"Makes" is closer to the passage of Tacitus , from which the line is taken, and is, besides, a stronger word than "leaves."
Mark where his carnage and his conquests cease—
He makes a Solitude, and calls it—peace.
You will perceive that the sense is now clearer, the "He " refers to "Man" in the preceding couplet.
Yours ever,
B.